TOP 13

1. NO "YOU," "YOURS" in the essay

2. QUALIFY ABSOLUTE SOUNDING SENTENCES: SOME "QUALIFYING" WORDS ARE:

some - maybe - probably - occasionally - several - many - most - perhaps - few

3. NO GENERIC PARAGRAPHS, ABSOLUTELY NOT

4. WATCH CONVERSATIONAL WRITING; THE USE OF SLANG "All you do, is .." or "Just pick up the chainsaw and….." AND ABSOLUTELY NO PREACHING OR PROVERBS

5. THE COMMA SPLICE!!!!

Your village has called , their idiot is missing.

6. "THEY," "IT" and pronoun confusion

7. "WW" = ? "In my esteem, the movie….."

8. "BEING/SINCE" THE "THERE" FAMILY

9. "NAS" = ? "Achieved by both fear and popularity, followed by authority."

10. A TAPESTRY OF B.S. ( BLOWING SMOKE): "What lies beneath the truth? That is the unvarnished tale in which we see the stories end."

11. ROCKET SCIENCE GONE BAD: "A bully will probably not resort to violence to achieve what they desire."

12. PLAGIARISM AND CITING SOURSES….

13. WHY WE DO NOT BEGIN A SENTENCE WITH: "WHICH" OR "WHILE"

ESP. IN THE LAST PARAGRAPGH
(one preacher per class is more than enough-proverbs 16:84)

14. "WHO" "THAT"

15. when I remember what this is I'll tell you. And that's the way it is…